Treatment Feedback

Treatment Feedback 

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In this task, I have gained target audience feedback on my treatment that will help me amend it. I will then create a second amended treatment based on the requirements of my target audience, helping me to display the narrative clearer using diverse variants of mise-en-scene.

In this task, I have gained target audience feedback from people within my target audience to help me decisively and effectively create improvements for my treatment, helping me to use clearer and more effective varieties of mise-en-scene that help me to convey my narrative in a far more evocative and engaging way. My overall feedback contained ideas that my target audience liked a lot of what I am proposing in my music video. The idea of displaying the narrative whilst following the stereotype adds a real sense of realism which can help the music video become more evocative and therefore audience engaging. Moving forward, I can now condense all the feedback that I have gained, creating a second amended treatment that I can follow in the production of my music video.