Second Amended Treatment

Second Amended Treatment

In this task, I have provided amendments to our original treatment depending on the feedback we received on our audience feedback. We went over our original ideas as a group and thought about how we could adapt them to meet the wants of our target audience, having to take on board a variety of different responses.

Made with Padlet

In conclusion, I was asked to provide amendments for my original treatment based on the information and feedback gained from our target audience's response. I have learnt the requirements of what I will need to include in my music video in order to keep my target audience engaged throughout, whilst displaying a narrative that is both clear and evocative, having a sense of realism to keep it flowing naturally. Moving forward, this task will help us to plan out our story board and shot by shot list so that we have a strong idea of what shots to film for our music video.

Comments

  1. JCoSS Media Dept22 December 2017 at 07:32

    There is not enough detail here. You need to justify your decisions and use appropriate media terminology. Please go through your treatment and make the necessary improvements.

    Miss C

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  2. Josh Burns7 February 2018 at 03:21

    complete

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  3. JCoSS Media Dept4 April 2018 at 08:35

    This has defintely improved, however some visuals to support your decisions would have been useful!

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